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The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. YLL3m

The pie charts give information about the proportion of males and females who were arrested over a five year period, while the bar chart compares the main reasons for arresting both sexes. The data is given in percentages. Overall, the most significant fact to emerge from the charts is that men were arrested more than females and that public drinking was the most common reason for arrest. Remarkably, the percentage of arrested men is much greater that women accounting for 32% and 9% respectively. In contrast, according to the bar chart, the figure of female is higher than male in the proportion of public drinking making approximately 37%. Note worthy that women also experienced a higher percentage of arrest rates for assault, approximately 19% whereas men made 17%. It is noticeable that men were twice as much to be arrested for drunk driving than women comprising 26% and 14% respectively. Breach of order, theft and other reasons were also slightly greater for male.

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 more than females and that public drinking was the most common reason for arrest.

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arrested
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men
 is much greater that women accounting for 32% and 9% respectively
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men
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