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The pie chart shows main reason for immigration and emigration to the UK in the year 2007

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The pie chart illustrates varied migration with reasons to and from the UK in the year 2007. In the year 2007, it accounted for 29 percentage of emigration and 30 percentage of immigration with regards to definite job in the UK. As regards to looking for work, it comprised of 22% who emigrated from the UK in the year 2007 whereas immigration was 10% with a difference of 10 percent. This also means the job opportunities outside the UK seems to be more. The initial figure for the immigration because of formal study is 26 percentage which is considerable more than emigration in the same terms and there is a difference of approximately 20 per cent. Furthermore, people who emigrated and immigrated relatively remained the same with respect to accompanying. The significant difference between Emigration and immigration in regards with no reason stated is 18% and 6% respectively. In conclusion, since Emigration and immigration are the most popular choices, it is clear that people emigration from the country and emigrating to the county is mostly due to definite job. In future, we can probably expect to see the same as their preferred choice.
The pie chart illustrates varied migration with reasons to and from the UK in the year 2007.

In the year 2007, it accounted for 29 percentage of emigration and 30 percentage of
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immigration
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job in the UK.

As regards to looking for work, it comprised of 22% who emigrated from the UK in the year 2007 whereas
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immigration
was 10% with a difference of 10 percent. This
also
means the job opportunities outside the UK seems to be more. The initial figure for the
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immigration
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of formal study is 26 percentage which is considerable more than emigration in the same terms and there is a difference of approximately 20 per cent.
Furthermore
,
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people
who emigrated and immigrated
relatively
remained the same with respect to accompanying. The significant difference between Emigration and
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immigration
in regards with no reason stated is 18% and 6%
respectively
.

In conclusion
, since Emigration and
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immigration
are the most popular choices, it is
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clear
that
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people
emigration from the country and emigrating to the county is
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due to
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definite
job.
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, we can
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the same as their preferred choice.
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