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Line chart Showing Monthly Revenue Trend of Company for 2 years.

Line chart Showing Monthly Revenue Trend of Company for 2 years. 6d2gB

The illustrated line chart displays Company's Revenue Trend for Monthly during 2 years period. From the first glance, according to totals, it is evident that though trend has got a fluctuation position, the percentage of income were the maximum in October. To start with Januar, in 2018, the line of output stood at 10 billions dollars. Meanwhile, this amount began to recover, and doubled in July to 20 billions dollars. But later fell to nearly 18 billions $ in August. However, there was dramatic rise a month later. It also reached roughly 28 billions $ last month of 2018. Come to new year, 2019, the number showed a significant deterioration nearly equal to half. Despite decreases, company's revenue trend displayed going up from February, and continued its upward trend more markedly, comprising exactly 30 billions dollars in October, 2019. While this indicator turned back initial position like in January 2018 last two months of 2019.

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 this indicator turned back initial position like in January 2018 last two months of 2019. 