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The pie chart shows eight popular subject for boys in a school.

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The pie chart shows eight popular subject for boys in a school. Overall, it can be seen that science and physical education are the two most popular subjects for the boys, while history is the least favorite subject for the boys Physical education is the most popular subject for boys in that school, a one third of the total boys like this subject. The second favorite subject for boys in this school is science, accounted for 25%. More than a half of the boys in this school either like physical education or science. Following science, mathematics comes in a third position, 18% of the total boys love to study this subject. Technology, English and geography not that popular among the boys in this school, with 10%, 8% and 5% respectively. The figure for history and other subjects 2% each and these are the two subject which least popular among the boys in this
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