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The map illustrates three options for building a leisure centre.

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Overall, the entire topography is of plain nature surrounded by a beautiful landscape. In particular, three locations are being scouted for selection. They are classified as locations A, B and C. To begin with, locations A and B both have transportation links with road and located in the bank of the river. In the territory of location A is some manufactories and environmental issues such as air pollution and emission are considered. Location B is located three houses without any infrastructure. There are fields nearby location B. Turning to location C, it is the furthest one from the riverside and road links, however, there are a lot of green forests. This place is not only a good location for the leisure centre but also the best condition for visitors that can get fresh air. Despite the advantages of this area, the destruction of the environment would be a significant problem.
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, the entire topography is of plain nature surrounded by a
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beautiful
landscape.
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locations
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being scouted
for selection. They
are classified
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locations
A, B and C.

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begin
with,
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locations
A and B both have transportation links with road and located in the bank of the river. In the territory of
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location
A is
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some
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manufactories
and environmental issues such as air pollution and emission
are considered
.
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Location
B
is located
three
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houses
without any infrastructure. There are fields nearby
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location
B.

Turning to
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location
C, it is the furthest one from the riverside and road links,
however
, there are
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a lot of
green forests. This place is not
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only
a
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good
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location
for the leisure
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but
also
the best condition for visitors that can
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get
fresh air. Despite the advantages of this area, the destruction of the environment would be a significant problem.
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IELTS academic The map illustrates three options for building a leisure centre.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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