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The pie chart represent the changerover of tourism rate over two different countries Australia and Germany in the span of 50 years. If we observe the pie charts Europe Stands in the top position during 1960 in the both Australia and Germany.While Asia is at the bottom in both the countries during the same period with 10% in both the countries. In the period 2010 Asia is at the highest percentage rate of 63% in Australia and in Germany Europe takes place with 40%.While in Australia the least rate scored was USA with 7% and Britain with 6% in Germany during 2010. In Australia during 1960 and 2010 Britain has 25% and 20% respectively.USA has 12% during 1960 and Europe has 10% during 2010. In Germany during 1960 and 2010 Europe has 45% and 40% respectively which is the highest and USA has 25% and 29% respectively.While Britain has 20% during 1960 and Asia has 25% during 2010.

The pie chart represent the changerover of tourism rate over two different countries Australia and Germany in the span of 50 years. If we observe the pie charts Europe Stands in the top position during 1960 in the both Australia and Germany. While Asia is at the bottom in both the countries during the same period with 10% in both the countries. In the period 2010 Asia is at the highest percentage rate of 63% in Australia and in Germany Europe takes place with 40%. While in Australia the least rate scored was USA with 7% and Britain with 6% in Germany during 2010. In Australia during 1960 and 2010 Britain has 25% and 20% respectively. USA has 12% during 1960 and Europe has 10% during 2010. In Germany during 1960 and 2010 Europe has 45% and 40% respectively which is the highest and USA has 25% and 29% respectively. While Britain has 20% during 1960 and Asia has 25% during 2010. oY1w

The pie chart represent the Possible spelling mistake found.changeoverchange roverchanger over
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 of tourism rate over two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
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 countries Australia and Germany in the span of 50 years.

If we observe the pie charts Europe Stands in the top position during 1960 in the both Australia and Germany. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 Asia is at the bottom in both the countries during the same period with 10% in both the countries.

In the period 2010 Asia is at the highest percentage rate of 63% in Australia and in Germany Europe takes place with 40%. While in Australia the least rate scored was USA with 7% and Britain with 6% in Germany during 2010.

In Australia during 1960 and 2010 Britain has 25% and 20% respectively
. USA has 12% during 1960 and Europe has 10% during 2010.

In Germany during 1960 and 2010 Europe has 45% and 40% respectively
 which is the highest and USA has 25% and 29% respectively
. While Britain has 20% during 1960 and Asia has 25% during 2010. 