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the graph below shows carbon dioxide emission of per person in united states, italy, sweden, portugale

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The provided line graph delineates the proportional data of carbon-dioxide exhalation on individual bases in four different countries between a period of 1967 to 2007. Overall, it is crystal clear that Sweden and United kingdom experience decreasing ejection of CO2 whereas, the average of CO2 exuding in Italy and Portugal is increasing over the period. United kingdom was the country with highest carbon emission with over 11 metric tones in the starting phase which was slightly decreased to 9 metric tones by the end of the period. Sweden was the second country which experienced the ratio down, in 1967 the rate of co2 released per individual was 8. 5 metric tones. However, the rate was increased in 1997 to 11 metric tones. Afterwards the figure was decreased gradually to 5 metric tones by 2007. The ratio was increased in Italy as the starting point was almost 4. 2 metric tones in 1967 which was increased at a rapid pase and reached at 7. 8 in 2007. Portugal was the country with least average of Co2 exhalation per person at the beginning, but at the last it was similar to ending proportion of Sweden.

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