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The pie chart provides information about the mean percentage in classical meals of three sort of nutriments

The pie chart provides information about the mean percentage in classical meals of three sort of nutriments J3L5a

The pie chart provides information about the mean percentage in classical meals of three sort of nutriments, all of which may be not good if eaten too much. In the USA, people consumed an average percentage of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in classical meals such as breakfast, dinner, lunch or snacks. Firstly, we will talk about the first pie chart that describes the sodium percentage in typical meals consumed in the USA. We can see that 43 percent of sodium, the majority of this pie chart, is consumed during dinner. As far as lunch is concerned, it represents about one third of the pie chart. Contrary to the two other meals, snacks and breakfast who share the same percentage of sodium, have the weakest percentage equal to 14 percent. Secondly, we can see in the second pie chart percentages of saturated fat in classical meals in the USA. As on the previous graph it is during the dinner in which the percentage is the highest. Otherwise, there isn’t large different between the three other meals. Finally, about the last pie graph, there is almost 50 percent of added sugar during the snacks. In conclusion, in the types of nutriments that people consumed in the USA, it is during the dinner where the consumption of the three types of nutriments is more important and may be unhealthy.

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