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The chart gives information about the proportion of wheat exported in three different countries: Australia, Canada and European Community over the period of 5 years starting in 1985

The chart gives information about the proportion of wheat exported in three different countries: Australia, Canada and European Community over the period of 5 years starting in 1985 M3oEe
The chart gives information about the proportion of wheat exported in three different countries: Australia, Canada and European Community over the period of 5 years starting in 1985. While the figures for wheat exported fluctuated over the period shown, it is clear that Australia had the lowest number of wheat export overall. European Community, on the other hand, had the highest proportion of wheat export at the end of period. At the beginning, Canada exported wheat more than Australia and European, standing at around 20 millions of tones. Moreover, there was a significant went up in the number of wheat that was exported in Canada from 1986 and 1988 and reached peak of 25 millions of tones in 1988. However, Canada experienced a enormous declined in the figures for exported wheat in 1989 and finished second place at the end of period. On the other hand, there was a fluctuated in the number of wheat exportation between 1985 and 1988 and increased quickly over the period of two years, peaking at 20 millions of tones. Australia, experienced a slight climb in the number of exported wheat but later dopped strongly during 5 years from 1986 to 1990 and reached a low at 10 millions of tones in 1990.
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countries: Australia, Canada and European Community over the
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of 5 years starting in 1985. While the figures for
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fluctuated over the
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shown, it is
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that Australia had the lowest
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. At the beginning, Canada
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more than Australia and European, standing at around 20
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in 1988.
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