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The pie chart provides information about the destination of anthropology graduates and their salaries from one university after five years work with different three types of employment (freelance consultants, government sector and private companies).

The pie chart provides information about the destination of anthropology graduates and their salaries from one university after five years work with different three types of employment (freelance consultants, government sector and private companies). K7q6
The pie chart provides information about the destination of anthropology graduates and their salaries from one university after five years work with different three types of employment (freelance consultants, government sector and private companies). Overall, the highest percentage of the graduates were full-time work and the least one for part-time and postgraduate study, whereas, the highest salaries for government sector and private sector was the lowest one. the anthropology graduates, which constituted the highest percentage at 52%, followed by Part-time work with 15%. The unemployment graduates were 12%, while the full-time postgraduates study and not known employment graduates, were the same proportion at 8%. On the other hand the least percentage was for part-time and postgraduates study with 5%. Meanwhile, the salaries of the anthropology graduates after five years of working with regard to their type of employment. The freelance consultants were the highest earned over 100, 000$ at 50% and 5% from $25, 000 to 49, 999. The government sector earned above $100, 000 with 40% compares to private sector which they constituted 30%. whereas the salaries from $25, 000 to 49, 999 for government and private sector about 5% and 10 % respectively.
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, which constituted the highest percentage at 52%, followed by Part-time work with 15%. The unemployment
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were 12%, while the full-time postgraduates study and not known employment
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, were the same proportion at 8%.
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of the anthropology
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after five years of working with regard to their type of employment. The freelance consultants were the highest earned over 100,
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earned above $100, 000 with 40% compares to
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which they constituted 30%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart provides information about the destination of anthropology graduates and their salaries from one university after five years work with different three types of employment (freelance consultants, government sector and private companies).

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