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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. eqdO

The layout highlights the process by which instant noodles are produced. Overall, the process of producing noodles is comprised eight stages commencing with storing flour in silos and ending with labeling and sealing the cups. The process initiates with flour being pumped from a truck into the two silos for storage. Subsequently, the flour is sent to a mixer, where it is blended with a combination of water and oil. The next stage is rolling over the mixture repeatedly to create dough sheets, and then going through a machine to be separated into a long strips. In the fifth stage of the process, these strips are moulded into many noodles discs, which are then cooked in oil and let for drying. In the following step, vegetables and spices are added with dried noodles, then they are put into different cups. Finally, the process ends with the cups being labeled and sealed, which finishes the whole process.

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