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The pie chart illustrates the various genres of water resources whereas the bar chart gives information about the amount of water distributed in three nations are Eygpt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.

The pie chart illustrates the various genres of water resources whereas the bar chart gives information about the amount of water distributed in three nations are Eygpt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. GLwng
The pie chart illustrates the various genres of water resources whereas the bar chart gives information about the amount of water distributed in three nations are Eygpt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. In general, it is readily apparent that fresh water account for a little amount of water in total and the compound of this water are ground, ice water and water. Eygpt and Saudi Arabia tend to utilize a large amount of water for agriculture whereas Canada focus mainly on industry. As we can see in two pie charts, salty is the main genre of water over the globe, rougly 97%, much higher than fresh water, just make up for 3%. In the second pie, the components forming fresh water consist of ground, water ice and water, account for 20%, 10% and 70%, respectively. According to bar graph, Eygpt and Saudi Arabia consume an enormous amount of water for agricultural production, at about 72% and 84%, subsequently. In constrast, Canadian concentrate primarily on industry, approximately 75% and the quantity of consumed water for agriculture is lowest, roughly 35%. The proportion of water utilized in domestic manufacture experience a minimal figure, just under 50% in all of countries.
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resources whereas the bar chart gives information about the
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of
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distributed in three nations are
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Eygpt
, Saudi Arabia and Canada.

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apparent that fresh
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water
account for a
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little
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amount
of
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in total and the compound of this
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are ground
, ice
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and
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.
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Eygpt
and Saudi Arabia tend to utilize a large
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amount
of
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water
for agriculture whereas Canada focus
mainly
on industry.

As we can
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in two pie charts, salty is the main genre of
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over the globe,
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rougly
97%, much higher than fresh
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,
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up for 3%. In the second pie, the components forming fresh
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consist of ground,
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ice and
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, account for 20%, 10% and 70%,
respectively
.

According to bar graph,
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Eygpt
and Saudi Arabia consume an enormous
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of
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water
for agricultural production, at about 72% and 84%,
subsequently
. In
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constrast
, Canadian concentrate
primarily
on industry, approximately 75% and the quantity of consumed
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for agriculture is lowest, roughly 35%. The proportion of
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water
utilized in domestic manufacture experience a minimal figure,
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just
under 50% in
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.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the various genres of water resources whereas the bar chart gives information about the amount of water distributed in three nations are Eygpt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.

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