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data on people's science qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore

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The bar chart demonstrates data on people's science qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore. Overall, while the percentage of people with no scientific qualifications is the largest, that of people with Master’s degree is the lowest in two countries. Looking at the chart, the proportion of people who hold Master’s degree is approximately 5 % in both countries. The percentage of people in Singapore with Bachelor's degree is 20%, which is twice more than the percentage in Malaysia. By contrast, the proportion of Singaporeans having School leaving exams accont for 30%, which is 5% less than that of Malaysians. The percentage of people who don’t have qualification in science is 65% in Malaysia, which is 5% more than its of people in Singapore.
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of
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with no scientific qualifications is the largest, that of
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with Master’s degree is the lowest in two countries.

Looking at the chart, the proportion of
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people
who hold Master’s degree is approximately 5 % in both countries. The
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percentage
of
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in Singapore with Bachelor's degree is 20%, which is twice more than the
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in Malaysia.

By contrast, the proportion of Singaporeans having School leaving exams
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for 30%, which is 5% less than that of Malaysians. The
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of
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who don’t have qualification in science is 65% in Malaysia, which is 5% more than its of
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in Singapore.
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IELTS academic data on people's science qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore

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