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The table chart and line chat give information about water users worldwide by different sectors

The table chart and line chat give information about water users worldwide by different sectors gADjl
The line chart represents the water usage in three sectors (agriculture, industry and domestic use)between 1900 to 2000, while table chart illustrate the consumption of water in Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo. Overall, it can be clearly inferred that worldwide utilisation of water increased significantly in the given period; highest amount of water was used for agriculture. Furthermore, it can also be seen that Brazil consumed more water as compare to Democratic Republic of Congo. According to the lion Jat, the agriculture required majority of water. During the first 40 years it was almost 1000 Km cube then shot up exponentially to nearly 3000 km cube in 2000. However, other two sectors, began with similar amount of water consumption (about 2000 km cube); Remained constant till 1950. After that, in 1960, Water need of industry rose up slowly along with the domestic use and ends up at around one-third consumption as of agriculture. turning to the table chart, Brazil with a higher population (176 million), irrigated land (26, 500 km cube )and water consumption per person (359 m cube) became major user of water, whereas Democratic Republic of Congo showed a least usage of water as it had minority in all the three sectors.
The line chart represents the
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usage in three sectors (agriculture, industry and domestic
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, while table chart illustrate the
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consumption
of
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in Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo.

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, it can be
clearly
inferred that worldwide
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utilisation
of
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increased
significantly
in the
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given
period; highest amount of
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was
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used
for agriculture.
Furthermore
, it can
also
be
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that Brazil consumed more
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as compare to Democratic Republic of Congo.

According to the lion
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, the agriculture required majority of
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. During the
first
40 years it was almost 1000 Km cube then shot up
exponentially
to
nearly
3000 km cube in 2000.
However
, other two sectors, began with similar amount of
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water
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consumption
(about 2000 km cube); Remained constant till 1950. After that, in 1960,
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need of industry rose up
slowly
along with the domestic
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use
and ends up at around one-third
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consumption
as of agriculture.

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turning
to the table chart, Brazil with a higher population (176 million), irrigated land (26, 500 km cube
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and
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per person (359 m cube) became major user of
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, whereas Democratic Republic of Congo
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as it had minority in all the three sectors.
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IELTS academic The table chart and line chat give information about water users worldwide by different sectors

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