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The pictures depict a number of changes which took place in Poulton during a 35 year period starting from 1900.

The pictures depict a number of changes which took place in Poulton during a 35 year period starting from 1900. paLlw
The pictures depict a number of changes which took place in Poulton during a 35 year period starting from 1900. Looking at the maps, it is readily apparent that Poulton in 1900 was a complex of industrial and residental areas. Besides that, the 1935 witnessed a big renovation to be totally residental feature in Poulton. In 1900, Poulton’s land was exploited for the cultivation and manufacturing purposes. On the left of Treant Street, a vast terraced houses was planted for crops annual. Futher more, on the top right hand corner, an enormous location called Wasteland was allocated next to a factory for the production activities. Some stores provided residents with essential things on a regular day such as shop, laundry erected at the same side and the opposite was a small café. Wasteland was also expanded on the right of Baley Street which nearby some cottages for labours working in the railway line located at the bottom. Some big chances was seen in the development of Poulton in 1935. The terraces houses was demolished to make space for two flats. In the middle centre, Bayley Street Park appeared replacing for farmland and accomodations. A new road was also constructed named New Lane and on the right side of the lane was three shops. Café and Laundry were on the same side instead of being oppisite in 1900. Factory was entirely vanished to give place for the presence of two block of flats- Baley and Mansion.
The pictures depict a number of
changes
which took place in
Poulton
during a
35 year
period starting from 1900.

Looking at the maps, it is
readily
apparent that
Poulton
in 1900 was a complex of industrial and
residental
areas.
Besides
that, the 1935 witnessed a
big
renovation to be
totally
residental
feature in
Poulton
.

In 1900,
Poulton
’s land
was exploited
for the cultivation and manufacturing purposes. On the
left
of
Treant
Street, a vast terraced
houses
was planted
for crops annual.
Futher
more, on the top
right hand
corner, an enormous location called Wasteland
was allocated
next
to a factory for the production activities.
Some
stores provided residents with essential things on a regular day such as shop, laundry erected at the same side and the opposite was a
small
café. Wasteland was
also
expanded on the right of
Baley
Street which nearby
some
cottages for
labours
working in the railway line located at the bottom.

Some
big
chances was
seen
in the development of
Poulton
in 1935. The terraces
houses
was demolished
to
make
space for two flats. In the middle
centre
,
Bayley
Street Park appeared replacing for farmland and
accomodations
. A new road was
also
constructed named New Lane and on the right side of the lane was three shops. Café and Laundry were on the same side
instead
of being
oppisite
in 1900. Factory was
entirely
vanished to give place for the presence of two
block
of flats-
Baley
and Mansion.
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IELTS academic The pictures depict a number of changes which took place in Poulton during a 35 year period starting from 1900.

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