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The pie chart illustrates the results from a survey of visitors to four types of tourist attractions

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The pie chart illustrates the results from a survey of visitors to four types of tourist attractions (Theme parks, Wildlife Parks and Zoos, Historic Houses and Monuments, Museums and Galleries) in Britain in the year 1999. The number of visitors is measured in percentages. Overall, the number of visitors to the Theme Park was higher than all other tourist attractions in the UK at that specific time. Museums and Galleries take second place with an almost equal number of visitors to the Theme Park. The number of people visiting the Wildlife Parks and Zoos and the Historic Houses and Monuments was the least. In terms of the total amount of people visiting the Theme Parks, the Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the main attraction. It filled the Theme Park with the majority of almost 50% of visitors as opposed to Alton Towers, Pleasuredland in Southport, Chessington World of Adventures, Legoland in Windsor (17%, 16%, 10%, and 10% respectively). On the other hand, Wildlife Parks and Zoos and the Historic Houses and Monuments had the least number of visitors. The pie chart presents that this kind of tourist attraction only accounts for a quarter (9% and 16% respectively).
The pie chart illustrates the results from a survey of
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(Theme
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, Wildlife
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Houses
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number
of
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visitors
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Theme
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Park
was higher than all other tourist
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attractions
in the UK at that specific time. Museums and Galleries take second place with an almost equal
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number
of
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visitors
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Theme
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Park
. The
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people
visiting the Wildlife
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Parks
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Houses
and Monuments was the least.

In terms of the total amount of
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visiting the
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, the Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the main
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attraction
. It filled the
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Theme
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Park
with the majority of almost 50% of
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as opposed to Alton Towers,
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Southport
,
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Chessington
World of Adventures,
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Legoland
in Windsor (17%, 16%, 10%, and 10%
respectively
).

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, Wildlife
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Parks
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Houses
and Monuments had the least
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visitors
. The pie chart presents that this kind of tourist
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attraction
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accounts for a quarter (9% and 16%
respectively
).
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the results from a survey of visitors to four types of tourist attractions

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