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The pie chart illustrates the outcome on a survey of children's activities where the cultural and leisure activities have been analyzed for both boys and girls.

The pie chart illustrates the outcome on a survey of children's activities where the cultural and leisure activities have been analyzed for both boys and girls. oGMq

The pie chart illustrates the outcome on a survey of children's activities where the cultural and leisure activities have been analyzed for both boys and girls. The most popular activity among the boys can be seen as computer games which takes a whopping 34 percent of their share in contrast with reading which has only 2 percent. With the girls the most popular activity can be noticed as dancing with a 27 percent share that surpasses reading by just 6 percent which falls at the second place. However it is noticeable that listening to music has taken the same share with both genders with no effect but is the least participated activity among the girls. Gymnastics from the female activity whereas skateboarding from the male has taken an equal share of 11 percent. It can be concluded that a higher number of boys are participating in leisure activities, contrastively a higher number of girls can be seen participating in cultural activities.

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 a higher number of girls can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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