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The pie chart illustrates the initial occupations of Anthropology students after graduation, while the table shows how much they got paid after five years of work in three different sectors.

The pie chart illustrates the initial occupations of Anthropology students after graduation, while the table shows how much they got paid after five years of work in three different sectors. rYxr6
What Anthology who graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate course and the salaries of the anthologists in work after five years are illustrated in the chart and the table in turn. On the one hand, through the chart, about over a half of anthologists go for full time work, about fifty two percent of total. Beside, come in second place, the percentage of people at part-time work takes up to 15 percent, which is just three-tenthsof the number of people of them at full-time work. At the third place, there are 12 percent of anthology unemployed, and there are 8 percent of people who are full time postgrad study and 8 percent who can’t be known. At last, people do both part time work and postgrad study just accounted for 5 percent. On the other hands, the table showed the salaries of Anthopology graduates after 5 years work. Most of government sector earns more money than other type of employment, about 50 percent of them earns more than $100. 000, while freelance consultants and private companies have 40percent and 30 percent who earn more than 100. 000$ in turn. About 5 percent of freelance consultants and 5 percent of government sector earn about 25. 000 to 49. 999, while private companies is higher than both of them, which takes up to 10 percent of them earn the same amount of money. Making a comparison, freelance consultants has the highest percentage of people who earns from 75000 to 99. 999. Besides, government sector has the highest percentage of people who earns more than 100. 000$. In addition, 35 percent of Anthropology in private companies is accounted for the highest earning from 50. 000 to 74. 999.
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graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate course and the salaries of the anthologists in
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after five years
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in the chart and the table in turn.

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fifty two
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in second place, the percentage of
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at part-time
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takes up to 15
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. At the third place, there are 12
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of anthology unemployed, and there are 8
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accounted for 5 percent.

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more money than other type of employment, about 50
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more than $100. 000, while freelance consultants and private
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more than 100.
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about 25. 000 to 49. 999, while private
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is higher than both of them, which takes up to 10
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from 75000 to 99. 999.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the initial occupations of Anthropology students after graduation, while the table shows how much they got paid after five years of work in three different sectors.

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