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the pie chart illustrates advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont island according to a survey of visitors.

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the pie chart illustrates advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont island according to a survey of visitors. as we can see the most topic wich visitors claimed to dislike is the cost of living wich covers about half of common oponions. in comparion one of desirable cases in that island is the "people" wichis the most important possitive point for the island and after that we can understand from the chart that having good entertainment in the island is not only an advantage about that island but also people mentioned that as a disadvantage and didn't enjoy from island's entertainments. overall this island has good views and sceneries and culture but it's too expensive and a boring place for having fun
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