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The bar chart shows the percentage of unemployed graduates

The bar chart shows the percentage of unemployed graduates OwBMM

The bar chart illustrates the graduate unemployment rate in an European country from 2008 to 2009. Overall, it can be seen that the percentages of unemployed men and women of 20-24 ages were fluctuated. In comparison, men were unemployed more than women over the period. In 2008, male unemployed graduates was at 10% in January, while women rate was at 8%. Male and female rates both declined to about 7% and 6% and remained unchanged in July. Subsequently, in October 2008, the men unemployment rate rose to over 15% and women’s at around 12%. However, the male unemployment percentage dropped to around 12% and remained steady from January to July before reaching the peak at over 20% in the end of the period. At the meantime, female graduates who were unemployed decreased to about 9% and 2% before rising to 10% in July 2009. Moreover, female rate had a significant surge to around 14% at the end of the period in October 2009.

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