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I live in the countryside in a small house nearby a river that called "Red River".

I live in the countryside in a small house nearby a river that called "Red River". b3WDY

The house is not only small but also beautiful. There is a small garden in front of it. In the garden, I grow some kinds of flowers and vegetables such as roses, cauliflower, gerberas, orchids. . . I water to them in my free times. There are four rooms in my house: a living room, a bedroom, a kitchen and a bathroom. In the living room, I put a sofa in the middle and a fish tank at the right corner with some fish in. On the wall, I hang a beautiful picture. On the table of the sofa is always a fresh flower vase. Next to the living room is the bedroom. What a warm bedroom! There is a bed near the window, a small table opposite the bed where I often sit to work. The bedroom is a place where I like best, I'm usually in it whenever I'm tired. Next is a kitchen. I always keep it clean. After work, I cook the meals for my family. Last is the bathroom. It is very bright with some modern equipment. After a working hard day I usually sink in the tub myself to relax. Although my house is small, it is very nice and warm. I love my house very much, and I think you will feel comfortable and friendly when you come to visit me. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon at my house.

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