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The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.

The pie charts illustrate about the useage of water mainly for which reasons in the four continents (Asia devided into parts). From the statistical diagram however, all of the wide range of places utilize water extreme for agericulture, Europe and North America not used maximum for that purpose. Such as, Africa 84% and South America 71%. On the other hand supreme reason for spending water by North America 48% and Europe 53% for Indusrial field. Nevertheless, all of the wide places use water in little percentage In case of domestic purpose, for South America is the 2nd bigger reason that is, 19%. According to the depiction, there is less difference of percentage for use of water between farming and factory in North America, that is (48- 39)% = 2%. In conclusion though, North America and Europe has somilarities, Africa and Asia continents has also huge close of same percentages.
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maximum for that purpose. Such as, Africa 84% and South America 71%.
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Indusrial
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percentage In case of domestic purpose, for South America is the 2nd bigger reason
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According to the depiction, there is less difference of percentage for
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48- 39
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IELTS academic The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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