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The below given charts show the reasons of cycling to work and reasons of driving to work.

The below given charts show the reasons of cycling to work and reasons of driving to work. EL0x3
The pie chart illustrates the reasons for riding a bicycle and driving to reach the workplace. Firstly, the most common reason behind cycling is to maintain health and fitness, to emit less pollution, which accounts for 30% each. While because of a lack of parking amenities around the fifth part of people prefer cycling to work and 13% people choose it just it is free of cost. Meanwhile, the remaining 12% do cycling to work due to they can reach their place quickly. Secondly, around 40% of people want comfort while driving to work. However, nearly less than a quarter of people prefer to drive because of the long-distance and 14% of people, give reasons that it is faster than cycling and another 14% say that, they can carry lots of things while driving to work. Lastly, only 11% give a reason that driving is way safer as compared to cycling. Overall, it can clearly be noticed the most people preferred to cycling to work due to it that can remain healthy and fit, cycling pollute less in comparison to driving, whereas the common reason for driving to work is to get comfortable.
The pie chart illustrates the
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reasons
for riding a bicycle and
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driving
to reach the workplace.
Firstly
, the most common
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reason
behind
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cycling
is to maintain health and fitness, to emit less pollution, which accounts for 30% each. While
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because
of a lack of parking amenities around the fifth part of
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people
prefer
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cycling
to
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work
and 13%
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people
choose it
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just
it is free of cost. Meanwhile, the remaining 12% do
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cycling
to
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work
due to they can reach their place
quickly
.
Secondly
, around 40% of
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people
want comfort while
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driving
to
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work
.
However
,
nearly
less than a quarter of
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people
prefer to drive
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because
of the long-distance and 14% of
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people
, give
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reasons
that it is faster than
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cycling
and another 14% say that, they can carry lots of things while
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driving
to
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work
.
Lastly
,
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only
11% give a
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reason
that
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driving
is way safer
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
compared to
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cycling
.
Overall
, it can
clearly
be noticed
the most
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people
preferred to
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cycling
to
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work
due to it that can remain healthy and fit,
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cycling
pollute less
in comparison
to
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driving
, whereas the common
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reason
for
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driving
to
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work
is to
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get
comfortable.
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IELTS academic The below given charts show the reasons of cycling to work and reasons of driving to work.

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