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The bar and line graph compares and contrasts the temperature and rainfall calculated during equatorial and Mediterranean climate.

The bar and line graph compares and contrasts the temperature and rainfall calculated during equatorial and Mediterranean climate. K07B9
Overall it can be seen that, maximum rainfall calculated in December during equatorial climate whereas in Mediterranean climate almost similar rainfall calculated between April to August. To begin with, in equatorial climate highest rainfall calculated in December that was 300cu mm also it was decreased by 50 cu mm in november but in other months the rainfall was calculated almost amount that was near about 200cu mm. Almost 250 cumm rainfall calculated in the month of January. However, from January to December temperature shows fluctuations that was near about 250 cu mm in January than it was reached at 250 cu mm in july but in the next months it remained constant and in December it was slowly decline and stood at 240 cu mm. On the other hand, in Mediterranean climate maximum rainfall calculated in January that was170 cu mm. The second highest rainfall calculated in December which was 150 cu mm but between april to October lowest rainfall calculated as well as similar amount of rainfall that was 10 cu mm. 60 cu mm rainfall was calculated in feburay and march. whereas in the month of January 150 cu mm temperature was calculated but in next month's it was sharply incline and reached at peak point in august that was almost 300 cu mm but from August to December it was rapidly decreased and stood at 150 cu mm.
Overall
it can be
seen
that, maximum
rainfall
calculated
in December during equatorial
climate
whereas in Mediterranean
climate
almost
similar
rainfall
calculated
between April to August. To
begin
with, in equatorial
climate
highest
rainfall
calculated
in December that was 300cu mm
also
it
was decreased
by 50 cu mm in
november
but
in other
months
the
rainfall
was
calculated
almost
amount that was near about 200cu mm.
Almost
250
cumm
rainfall
calculated
in the
month
of January.
However
, from January to December temperature
shows
fluctuations that was near about 250 cu mm in January than it
was reached
at 250 cu mm in
july
but
in the
next
months
it remained constant and in December it was
slowly
decline
and stood at 240 cu mm.
On the other hand
, in Mediterranean
climate
maximum
rainfall
calculated
in January that was170 cu mm. The second highest
rainfall
calculated
in December which was 150 cu mm
but
between
april
to October lowest
rainfall
calculated
as well
as similar amount of
rainfall
that was 10 cu mm. 60 cu mm
rainfall
was
calculated
in
feburay
and march.
whereas
in the
month
of January 150 cu mm temperature was
calculated
but
in
next
month's it was
sharply
incline
and reached at peak point in
august
that was
almost
300 cu mm
but
from August to December it was
rapidly
decreased and stood at 150 cu mm.
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