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The two Pie charts compare the main features that got changed from 2019 and 2020. Overall, in 2019 most of the top sales are clothing. Electroincs ranks first in the year 2020. There are some products which varies by their proportion. Turning to the first chart, we can observe clothing has more popularity with 38%. Home and kitchen ranks second most sold one with a percentage of 29%. Electronic and groceries, latter was the least moved item when compared to other in 2019. Taking a close look over the second chart, we can see that Electronics are frist most ietms. Second most rank goes to home and kitchen with an percentage of 45%. groceries and clothing are in equal proportions with 22% respectively. when compared to 2019 electoinc appliances were rose to 45%. There was a dras tic change in home and kitchen which was fallen to 11%. groceries purchases were more in 2020 and clothing were down to 22%.
The two Pie charts compare the main features that
got
changed
from 2019 and 2020
.

Overall
, in 2019 most of the top sales are clothing.
Electroincs
ranks
first
in


the
year 2020. There are
some
products which varies by their proportion.

Turning to the
first
chart, we can observe clothing has more popularity with

38%. Home and kitchen ranks second most sold one with a percentage of 29%.

Electronic and groceries, latter was the least
moved
item when compared to

other
in 2019.

Taking a close look over the second chart, we can
see
that Electronics are
frist


most
ietms
. Second most rank
goes to home
and kitchen with
an
percentage of 45%.
groceries
and clothing are in equal proportions with 22%
respectively
.

when
compared to 2019
electoinc
appliances were rose to 45%. There was a
dras tic
change
in home and kitchen which
was fallen
to 11%.
groceries
purchases


were
more in 2020 and clothing were down to 22%.
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IELTS academic comparison between the items consumed

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9 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
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