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some people believe that mobile phones should be prohibited on public places. do you agree or disagree

some people believe that mobile phones should be prohibited on public places. E3oBD

Mobile phones have become an essential part of life. Some masses consider that these electronic devices should be prohibited in public places such as shops, libraries and public transport but I have different views about this idea. I don’t agree with this statement. Evidently, nowadays everyone relies on electronic gadgets. There are numerous benefits to these devices to us. These electronic gadgets reduce the barrier among people. We can easily use these devices at libraries and other public places which are helpful for us. We can get any kind of information online by using these devices. For example, if we don’t understand any meaning of the word we can research it. Furthermore, we can save their personal documents in these electronic devices. People can also keep their library card into mobile phones. They don’t need to carry their card along with them. Nevertheless, Individuals can carry these gadgets for different purposes. For example, They can save their credit or debit cards into these useful gadgets and use them anywhere. For example, If someone has disregarded their wallet at home then they can pay by mobile phone instead of a card. Moreover, these devices are very convenient for travelling purposes. Individuals can use these gadgets in public places to find out any location or so on. They can easily reach their destination using a navigation map. They can search for any kind of location. They can also check timetables online to apply journey purposes. To conclude, these gadgets are very convenient for us and these have numerous benefits. So, it should not be banned in public places in future.

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Some
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electronic
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devices
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public
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places
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public
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but
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different
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idea
. I don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement.

Evidently
, nowadays everyone relies on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomputerized
electronic
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gadgets
. There are numerous benefits to these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgearapparatusgadgetmaterialappliancemechanism
devices
 to us. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomputerized
electronic
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gadgets
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the barrier among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. We can easily
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use
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devices
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public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 which are helpful for us. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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devices
. For example
, if we don’t understand any meaning of the word we can research it. Furthermore
, we can save their personal documents in these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomputerized
electronic
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devices
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 can also
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keep
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card
 into mobile phones. They don’t need to carry their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 along with them.

Nevertheless
, Individuals can carry these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontraptionwidgetapparatusutensiltoolobject
gadgets
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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, They can save their credit or debit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
cards
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gadgets
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 them anywhere. For example
, If someone has disregarded their wallet at home then they can pay by mobile phone instead
 of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
. Moreover
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgearapparatusgadgetmaterialappliancemechanism
devices
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very
 convenient for travelling purposes. Individuals can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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gadgets
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public
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places
 to find out any location or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. They can easily
 reach their destination using a navigation map. They can search for any kind of location. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
 can also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 timetables online to apply journey purposes.

To conclude
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontraptionwidgetapparatusutensiltoolobject
gadgets
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 convenient for us and these have numerous benefits. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, it should not be banned
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
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in future
. 