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The pie chart compares five different kinds of fuel generated in France over a 10 year period from 1995 and 2005

The pie chart compares five different kinds of fuel generated in France over a 10 year period from 1995 and 2005 joBrd
The pie chart compares five different kinds of fuel generated in France over a 10 year period from 1995 and 2005. Overall it can be seen that coal and gas where the most significant parts of energy production in both years and it almost cover the half of the energy production. While, nuclear, petrol and other sources comprises the least significant part. There were a gradual dip on petroleum production over 10 years. However, nuclear and other energy rose the production rates. In 1895 the production ratio of coal and gas their 29. 8 0% and 29. 6 3% respectively similarly in 2005 and gas comprise the 13. 3% and 30. 3 1% of Total energy production both shows about 1% of increase in production over a decade in regards to the nuclear energy which are counter 6. 40 % in 1995 and become became 10. 1% in 2005 about 4% increase the rate.
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that coal and gas where the most significant parts of
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in both years and it almost
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. While, nuclear, petrol and other sources comprises the least significant part. There were a gradual dip on petroleum
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over 10 years.
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, nuclear and other
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rose the
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rates.

In 1895 the
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ratio of coal and gas their 29. 8 0% and 29. 6 3%
respectively
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in 2005 and gas comprise the 13. 3% and 30. 3 1% of Total
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energy
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both
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about 1% of increase in
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over a decade
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the nuclear
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which are counter 6. 40 % in 1995 and become became 10. 1% in 2005 about 4% increase the rate.

IELTS academic The pie chart compares five different kinds of fuel generated in France over a 10 year period from 1995 and 2005

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