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The diagram descibes the process of recycling plastics.

The diagram descibes the process of recycling plastics. BlD55
A glance at the diagram illustrates the process of plastic recycling. There are various stages beginning with plastic waste collection and culminating when that material is turned into new products purchased in the market before repeating the process. In the early steps, being categorized, individuals’ waste is then collected by a plastic recycling company. Subsequently, lorries transfer that waste to a plastic factory, followed by accumulating it in a warehouse. The process continues when plastic is transported for further processing, which is an inspection and classification of the plastic. In the following stages, plastic material is cut into infinitesimal pieces after being placed in crushing machines. At that point, plastic items washed with biodegradable soap and water are packed into paper boxes for shipment. Afterward, cartons are transmitted to partner facilities, which are prepared for the next manufacturing. In the final analysis, plastic is made to become new products resold on the open market.
A glance at the diagram illustrates the process of
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plastic
recycling. There are various stages beginning with
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plastic
waste collection and culminating when that material
is turned
into new products
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purchased
in the market
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before
repeating the process.

In the early steps,
being categorized
, individuals’ waste is then collected by a
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plastic
recycling
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company
.
Subsequently
, lorries transfer that waste to a
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plastic
factory, followed by accumulating it in a warehouse. The process continues when
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plastic
is transported
for
further
processing, which is an inspection and classification of the plastic.

In the following stages,
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plastic
material is
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cut
into infinitesimal pieces after
being placed
in crushing machines. At that point,
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plastic
items washed with biodegradable soap and water
are packed
into paper boxes for shipment. Afterward, cartons
are transmitted
to partner facilities, which
are prepared
for the
next
manufacturing. In the final analysis,
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plastic
is made
to become new products resold on the open market.
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