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just over 30% = about one-third approximately 50% = about half under 25% = less than one-quarter 1 in 20 people = 5% of people

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the two charts give analyzation of different applications prefer by young adults in Canada over ten years from 2009 to 2019. in this course of ten years, there is some significant substitute of choices. overall, the vital change is, how people developed flat screen tv has replaced traditional televisions, with the amazing rise of 8% to 27, making it a most prominent television device at the second scale. the general drift is that in 2019 portable device like mobile phones and tablets has an amounting number of users than the year 2009. the flat screen tv percentages last thrive from 8% to more than one quarter in 2019. in the time period of ten years, the growth of compact devices outpaces lower the percentages of convenient TVs, as well as desktop and laptop computer also experienced the downfall of numbers respectively. observably, younger age favoring newly modernized technology over traditional devices
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