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Changes in Felixstone between 1967 and 2001

Changes in Felixstone between 1967 and 2001 GNa2e
The maps show a number of changes in Felixstone between 1967 and 2001. It is clear that the Felixstone has developed significantly for 34 years, and show a few pecularity can be seen in the next diagram. The noticable evolution are huge edifice has been described inside with hotel, swimming pool and two tennis courts to the northeast. The next main variation is public beach has been reconstructed instead of the Marina. On the contrary, some structures have been not changed and remained in their places such as the golf course, cafe and shops. In addition, in the middle of the Felixstone has been added car park near by hotel, where cars can dock. The other change that in the southeastern has been modificated to private beach. Finally, a bit change is that in the westeastern have been constructed wind turbines
The maps
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a number of
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changes
in
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Felixstone
between 1967 and 2001. It is
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clear
that the
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Felixstone
has developed
significantly
for 34 years, and
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show
a few
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pecularity
can be
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seen
in the
next
diagram. The
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noticable
evolution are huge edifice has been
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described
inside with hotel, swimming pool and two tennis courts to the northeast. The
next
main variation is public beach has
been reconstructed
instead
of the Marina.
On the contrary
,
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some
structures have been not
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changed
and remained in their places such as the golf course,
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cafe
and shops.
In addition
, in the middle of the
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Felixstone
has been
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added
car park
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near by
hotel, where cars can dock. The other
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change
that in the southeastern has been
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modificated
to private beach.
Finally
, a
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bit
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change
is that in the
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westeastern
have
been constructed
wind turbines

IELTS academic Changes in Felixstone between 1967 and 2001

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