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The circular chart illustrates information about the agricultural production in eastern and western regions of a nation.

The circular chart illustrates information about the agricultural production in eastern and western regions of a nation. OyVJM
The given circular pie chart elaborate about farming production in eastern and western regions of a country. Overall, it is quite evident that the production of grain was maximum in western regions, while similar ratio of meat in both sides. moreover, the minimum ratio was noted in vegetables of western field. At the fleeting glance it is clearly shows that the production of vegetables in eastward comprising off at 20%, whilst in westward dwindling to 5%. furthermore, the figure of meat stood at 35%. Further stating the pie graph, the ratio of dairy products in western regions amounting to 15%, whereas escalated to 30% in east side. in addition, the produced of grain was noted at 45% of grain in wesyward and falling off at 15% in eastern field.
The
given
circular pie chart elaborate about farming production in eastern and western regions of a country.
Overall
, it is quite evident that the production of grain was maximum in western regions, while similar ratio of meat in both sides.
moreover
, the minimum ratio
was noted
in vegetables of western field. At the fleeting glance it is
clearly
shows
that the production of vegetables in eastward comprising off at 20%, whilst in westward dwindling to 5%.
furthermore
, the figure of meat stood at 35%.
Further
stating the pie graph, the ratio of dairy products in western regions amounting to 15%, whereas escalated to 30% in east side.
in
addition, the produced of grain
was noted
at 45% of grain in
wesyward
and falling off at 15% in eastern field.
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IELTS academic The circular chart illustrates information about the agricultural production in eastern and western regions of a nation.

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