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The pie chart brings out the information about the units of electricity production

The pie chart brings out the information about the units of electricity production 8dbPk
The pie chart brings out the information about the units of electricity production by five different types of fuel source in two countries in two decades. Overall, it can be apparently seen that, maximum electricity produced by coal and minimum on oil in Australia; whereas highest units of electricity made by nuclear power and least on hydro power in France. With regards, it is evident that, coal fuel was more popular as compared to other fuels in Australia. In 1980, 100 unit produced electricity in which coil used as 50; whilst 130 unit in 2000. Moreover, power was 20 units in 1980 on the other hand 16 units more produced in 2000. In addition, both oil and natural gas used for 2 units in 2000. In 1980, natural gas was 20 units. It is clearly seen that, In 2000, electricity more produced was 180 units; while 90 units in 1980. Nuclear power was 136 unit in 2000; whereas 15 units in 1980. Furthermore, coal produced same units in both years which was 25 units. In terms of oil, 5 units more made elertricity in 2000. other remain fuel were producing merely 5 units in Spain of time.
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made by nuclear
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in France.

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in Australia. In 1980, 100
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in which coil
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as 50; whilst 130
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was 20
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in 1980
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in 2000. In 1980, natural gas was 20 units.

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was 180
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; while 90
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in 1980. Nuclear
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was 136
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in 2000; whereas 15
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in 1980.
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