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Parents believe that private tuition classes where students work alone with the teacher help them score better at school.

Parents believe that private tuition classes where students work alone with the teacher help them score better at school. lLm6D
Parents have faith in that, personal tuition classes is more favourable for learner to mark best at school. While there are both advantage and disadvantage associated with this topic, but in my opinion the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks. First one advantage of private tuition is that students can cultivate values and skills. They become more self disciplined and responsible. Whenever, in private tuition classes, Tutor can teach students more than their syllabus. Furthermore, tutor in private tuition are less strict whereas the tutors in school are more strict. I think in private tuition classes students study in a suitable environment condition because private tuition classes have peaceful environment, comfortable seats than that of at school. For example; if the class environment is peaceful, decorated, and managed students can concentrate more than before. Although there are few disadvantages regarding this topic. one of the disadvantage of private tuition is that it may be too expensive and have less time for extra curricular and other activities as well. For low income families private tuition may be too costly to afford. In private tuition classes, student and tutors both are busy in their task, so there were not extra time for extra task or extra knowledge for learners. Private tuition class may be too expensive as we mentioned it above. For example, when a student from low income family go for private tuition classes then he cannot afford due to high price for this reason private tuition class is useless for those pupils. In conclusion we get private tuition classes have both pros and cons on their own perspective. Private tuition is more beneficial for learner to secure better at school over than other classes whereas it also have negative expects such as having high fee and others.
Parents have faith in that, personal tuition
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in my opinion the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks.
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one advantage of
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tuition is that
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students
can cultivate values and
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skills
. They become more self disciplined and responsible. Whenever, in
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,
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can teach
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students
more than their syllabus.
Furthermore
,
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tutor
in
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private
tuition are less strict whereas the
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in
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school
are more strict. I
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students
study in a suitable environment condition
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because
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private
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have peaceful environment, comfortable seats than that of at
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school
.
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; if the
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environment is peaceful, decorated, and managed
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students
can concentrate more than
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there are few disadvantages regarding this topic.
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one
of the disadvantage of
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tuition is that it may be too expensive and have less time for
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extra curricular
and other activities
as well
. For low income families
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private
tuition may be too costly to afford. In
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private
tuition
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,
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student
and
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tutors
both are busy in their task,
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so
there were not
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extra
time for
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extra
task or
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extra
knowledge for learners.
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tuition
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class
may be too expensive as we mentioned it above.
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student
from low income family go for
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tuition
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then he cannot afford due to high price
for this reason
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tuition
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class
is useless for those pupils. In
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have both pros and cons on their
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perspective.
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tuition is more beneficial for learner to secure better at
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school
over than other
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whereas it
also
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negative
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expects
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IELTS academic Parents believe that private tuition classes where students work alone with the teacher help them score better at school.

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