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the chart show the amount of colonies and honey product from 1970 to 2010

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The charts show the number of bee colonies between 1970 and 2010 and the amount of honey they producted between 1970 and 2010 in the United States. The first chart shows the number of honey-bee colonies from 1970 to 2010. The least number of colonies are 1. 8 milions in 2010 and the highest number of bee colonies are 4. 2 miliones in 1980. We can saw that the number of bee colonies from 1970 to 2010 was trendy decreased in the US. Shows the detail, we can saw between 1970 and 1980 the number of bee colonies increased from 4 milions to 4. 2 milions colonies but between 1980 and 2010 was quitely decreased from 4. 2 milions in 1980 to 1. 8 miliones colonies in 2010. That things show deforestation, people cut down trees to build farms and houses, bee lost habitat. Result in honey-bee colonies were decreased between 1970 and 2010. The second chart shows the amount of honey production between 1970 and 2010 in the United States. The least amount of production is 70. 000 tones in 2010 and the highest is 130. 000 tones in 1970. We can show that the amount of honey they producted from 1970 to 2010 was trendy decreased in the US. The detail can show that between 1970 and 1980 the amount of production decreased from 130. 000 tones to 110. 000 tones, between 1980 and 1990 honey they producted increased from 110. 000 tones to 120. 000 tones and from 1990 to 2010 the amount of honey-bee production quitely decreased from 120. 000 tones to 70. 000 tones. The chart shows the problem is less bee colonies less honey they producted. Overall, Both charts were trendy decreased because the habitat of honey-bee was destroyed to build buildings, farms, developing economic, …That thing in the future lead to shortage honey production.
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deforestation,
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, bee lost habitat. Result in honey-bee
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between 1970 and 2010.

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is 70. 000
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in 2010 and the highest is 130. 000
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in 1970. We can
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producted
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