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The pie chart below shows the worldwide distribution of private insurance policies.

The pie chart below shows the worldwide distribution of private insurance policies. Lr3LV
The pie chart compares the four kinds of private insurance policies in the world, while the table illustrates the policy owned by country, namely, India, England, and Australia. Overall, insurance for auto has a large proportion globally as compared to others as the least, while more people in England are insured than in Australia and India. Focusing on the pie chart, it is apparent that auto, health, life, and other(s) are the four types of private insurance in the world. Auto insurance has the largest share, which accounts for 35% of the total, while health and life have 31% and 28%, respectively. Other insurance policies have the lowest percentage of only 6%. The table shows that 25% of the people in England have a private insurance policy, 10% more than of Australia, and three times more than that of India which is 7%. The majority of Englishmen and Australians have registered for car insurance which accounted for 10% and 1. 9%, respectively, while 3. 5% of Indian considers the importance of health.
The pie chart compares the four kinds of private
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insurance
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policies
in the world, while the table illustrates the
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policy
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owned
by country,
namely
, India, England, and Australia.

Overall
,
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insurance
for auto has a large proportion globally as compared to others as the least, while more
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people
in England
are insured
than in Australia and India.

Focusing on the pie chart, it is apparent that auto, health, life, and other(s) are the four types of private
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insurance
in the world. Auto
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insurance
has the largest share, which accounts for 35% of the total, while health and life have 31% and 28%,
respectively
. Other
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insurance
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policies
have the lowest percentage of
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only
6%.

The table
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shows
that 25% of the
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people
in England have a private
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insurance
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policy
, 10% more than of Australia, and three times more than that of India which is 7%. The majority of Englishmen and Australians have registered for car
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insurance
which accounted for 10% and 1. 9%,
respectively
, while 3. 5% of Indian considers the importance of health.
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