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Exports of an country between the year 2015 an 2016

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The given bar graph describes the values of exports of various goods in one country during the years 2015 and 2016. A table is also given which tells us about the change in the percentage of exports between the years 2015 and 2016. From the graph, it is clear that petroleum products contribute the most to country's exports, whereas the textile contributes the least to it. Even though this is the case, we can see the rapid growth of the export value of 15% from textiles from 2015 to 2016. While there is very marginal increase in export values of agricultural products and petroleum products with an increase of 0. 81% and 3 %, respectively. What is interesting to find is that the gems and jewellery sector is the only sector where we can see a decrease in the export profits by 5. 18%. In conclusion, we can see steady growth in the export values of the country from 2015 to 2016. Even though we can see a decrease in the gems and jewellery export, we can see a significant improvement in textiles and even though a marginal, yet a steady improvement in other goods.
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of various
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goods
in one country during the years 2015 and 2016. A table is
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which
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us about the
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change
in the percentage of
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between the years 2015 and 2016.

From the graph, it is
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clear
that petroleum products contribute the most to country's
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exports
, whereas the textile contributes the least to it.
Even though
this is the case, we can
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the rapid growth of the
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export
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value
of 15% from textiles from 2015 to 2016. While there is
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very
marginal increase in
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export
values of agricultural products and petroleum products with an increase of 0. 81% and 3 %,
respectively
.

What is interesting to find is that the gems and
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jewellery
sector is the
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only
sector where we can
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see
a decrease in the
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export
profits by 5. 18%.

In conclusion
, we can
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see
steady growth in the
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export
values of the country from 2015 to 2016.
Even though
we can
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see
a decrease in the gems and
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jewellery
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export
, we can
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see
a significant improvement in textiles and
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yet
a steady improvement in other
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goods
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IELTS academic Exports of an country between the year 2015 an 2016

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4 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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