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the chart below shows informtion about wages for health care professionals in four diffrent countries.summarize the information.

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the chart below compares the average monthly salaries for qualified healthcare professionals in four different countries between nurses and doctors. it is clear that the incomes of doctors and nurses in country d, which receive health care professionals from abroad is the highest income and country allocate the lowest income with monthly $35 for nurses and $64 for doctors. this chart can obviuosly show us the most important reason of the nurse shortage in some countries, nurses and doctors all over the world, prefer to work for high salaries and because of this they are decide to migrate to the advanced countries, which have vacancies to fill with better situation from their own country and this causes a serious issues in those countries which supply healthcare professionals to others countries for example, there is an epidemic particular diseases in some countries and they do not have supply to administer patients and this can causes a national disaster for that country because soon or late a huge number of people will be dead there.

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