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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. gmND
The line graph illustrates a data of number of people visiting Louvre, Vatican museum, London Science museum and Shenzhen museum over a period 35 years starting from 1980. Overall an increasing trend is observed in the number of visitors for Vatican museum for the entire duration, whereas the London science museum has seen a decreasing trend after the initial number of steady visitors. The number of people visiting Vatican museum was roughly around 5 million for the year 1980 and it has shown an exponential growth since then in the number of people visiting each year. In 2015 this number was roughly around 9 million visitors similar to Louvre. Louvre initially was the most popular destination with close to 8 million visitors in 1980. It had a good increase in number of visitors during 1990-1995 with close to 8. 5 million visitors however a drop in this number was observed from year 1995 to 2000 when visitor’s numbers dropped down till 8 million but then an upward trend has been maintained. Shenzhen museum initially showed a decreasing trend where the number of people visiting dropped from around 4 million in 1980 to 3. 5 million in 2000, but since then it has shown a positive growth and reached where it was at the beginning. On the other hand London Science museum after having consistent number of visitors of 4 million for first 5 years has seen a decreasing trend since 1985 and has the lowest number of visitors among 4 destinations in 2015 of roughly 2 million visitors.
The line graph illustrates a data of
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, London Science
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and Shenzhen
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over a period 35 years starting from 1980.

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for Vatican
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for the entire duration, whereas the London science
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after the initial
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of steady visitors.

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visiting Vatican
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was roughly around 5
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for the
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1980 and it has shown an exponential growth since then in the
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was roughly around 9
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similar to Louvre. Louvre
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in 1980. It had a
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during 1990-1995 with close to 8. 5
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however
a drop in this
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1995 to 2000 when
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Shenzhen
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initially
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where the
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in 1980 to 3. 5
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in 2000,
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since then it has shown a
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growth and reached where it was at the beginning.
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London Science
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after having consistent
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among 4 destinations in 2015 of roughly 2
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