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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. 2bQgo
The pie chart shows four reasons why farming area becomes less productive, on the other hand the table gives information about causes of land degradation by region. Worldwide over grazing is 35 % and other is 7 %. Europe suffered more from fram land degradation than any other regions and the causes is deforestation and fram land over cultivation. Globally, degradation caused by too much animal grazing and clearance of tree, constituting 35 % and 30 %. 28% degradation caused by crops over-cultivation and other degradation caused only 7%. Worldwide causes of fram land degradation by region during the 1990s. Europe had the highest percentage of fram land degradation and the main causes is deforestation and over cultivation. The lowest percentage of degraded by north America. Their deforestation percentage is only 0. 2 % and over cultivation, over grazing constituting 3. 3 % and 1. 5 %. Oceania over-cultivation was 0% and deforestation was 1. 7 %, last on 11. 3% over-grazing was highest percentage than any other region.
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four reasons why farming area becomes less productive, on the
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land
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Worldwide
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grazing is 35 % and
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Globally,
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caused by too much animal grazing and clearance of tree, constituting 35 % and 30 %. 28%
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degradation
caused by crops over-cultivation and
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cultivation,
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grazing constituting 3. 3 % and 1. 5 %. Oceania over-cultivation was 0% and
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was 1. 7 %, last on 11. 3% over-grazing was
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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