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The pie chart below shows the favourite school subjects for boys in a school.

The pie chart below shows the favourite school subjects for boys in a school. Gn2L

Presented is a pie chart gives information regarding the proportion of subjects which are favourable of male school goers in a particular school. In overall, it is quite evident that physical activity based subjects come in the first place, whereas last on the list was history in the group above mentioned. In more detail, physical education is the number-one subject, constituting just below a third of the respondents choosing this. This is followed by science which is chosen by 25% boys, making it almost fourfold as popular as geography. With just under a fifth boys regarding technology as a favorite subject this figure surpasses English share (exactly 10%) but is left behind by those of matematics fans (18%). Looking at the negligeble figures, geography is ranked in the sixth place with mere 5% of boys in the school liking most geography, the remaining of 4% is distributed identically for history and other subjects in turn.

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