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The graph belows shows the montly profits of three australian companies in the car retail industry for the 1994 financial year.

The line graph illustates the monthly profits of three australian companies including: Acme sports cars, Branson motors and curtis car mart, dealing in car industry for 1994 financial year. overall, an interesting point is that both branson motors' and curtis car marts' profit percentage upward while that of acme sports cars' has downward trend over the period. The leading company in the starting year was acme sports cars have the largest monthly profits of 70000pounds. In the next quarter, tax was imposed on luxury goods, acme sports cars' profit hit a trough at around 10000 pounds in the end of second quarter. At the end of third quarter when media reports boosted in australian economy, the profit of acme sports cars rose slightly from 10000pounds to just over 40000 pounds. Acme sports cars from a leading company in profit, at the end of financial year becoming the bottom of the table. Branson motors has twice as much as curtis cars marts. In the first quater, the profit of branson motors increased sharply from 20000 pounds to approximately 50000 puonds while those of curtis cars marts fell 20000 pounds to 10000 pounds. In the next two quarters, tax was imposed on luxury goods, both branson motors and curtis car mart fluctuated but curtis car marts grew, branson motors dropped to40000 pounds and 50000 pounds respectively. Media reports that happended at the end of third quarter brought a boost in thr economy, curtis car mart ứa making twice the profit at the end than at the begining ò the financial year, this made curtis car mart have the lagest profit. Branson motors wass the secong place les than curtis car mart about 20000 pounds.
The line graph
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illustates
the monthly
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profits
of three
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australian
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companies
including: Acme
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sports
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cars
, Branson
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motors
and
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curtis
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car
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mart
, dealing in
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car
industry for 1994 financial
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year
.
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overall
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branson
motors' and
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curtis
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car
marts'
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profit
percentage upward while that of acme
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sports
cars' has downward trend over the period. The leading
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company
in the starting
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was acme
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sports
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cars
have the largest monthly
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profits
of 70000pounds. In the
next
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quarter
, tax
was imposed
on luxury
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goods
, acme
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sports
cars'
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profit
hit a trough at around 10000 pounds in the
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end
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end
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when media reports boosted in
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australian
economy, the
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profit
of acme
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sports
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cars
rose
slightly
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over 40000 pounds. Acme
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cars
from a leading
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company
in
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end
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becoming the bottom of the table. Branson
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motors
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curtis
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cars
marts. In the
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quater
, the
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branson
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motors
increased
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puonds
while those of
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curtis
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marts fell 20000 pounds to 10000 pounds. In the
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quarters
, tax
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goods
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branson
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curtis
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car
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mart
fluctuated
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curtis
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car
marts grew,
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branson
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motors
dropped to40000 pounds and 50000 pounds
respectively
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brought a boost in
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economy,
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curtis
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mart
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ứa
making twice the
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profit
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begining
ò the financial
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, this made
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curtis
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car
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mart
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lagest
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profit
. Branson
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secong
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about 20000 pounds.

IELTS academic The graph belows shows the montly profits of three australian companies in the car retail industry for the 1994 financial year.

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