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The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years. XEWVO
The given pie charts compare the production of energy by five types of fuel in terms of percentage in the Uk for the years 2014 and 2018. The fuel types include renewables, coal, nuclear power, gas, oil and others. Overall, renewable energy is the only one which showed a significant increase over the years. Meanwhile, the consumption of coal and nuclear power showed a marked decrease and minimal fall respectively. Interestingly, the energy sources provided by gas, oil and others remained constant throughout the span of 4 years. Regarding renewables, there was a drastic rise in the production rates from 15% in 2014 to 26. 2% in 2018. However, the contribution by coal decreased markedly by approximately 10% with the final figures at 18. 1% in 2018. In 2014, nuclear power production accounted for 22. 5% of the total energy. Later in 2018, this energy generation dropped only by 1% whereas the production of energy by gas, oil and others remained unchanged at 30. 1% and 4% respectively.
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pie charts compare the
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of
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by five types of fuel in terms of percentage in the
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Uk
for the years 2014 and 2018. The fuel types include renewables, coal, nuclear power, gas, oil
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and others
.

Overall
, renewable
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energy
is the
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one which
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a significant increase over the years. Meanwhile, the consumption of coal and nuclear power
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showed
a marked decrease and minimal fall
respectively
.
Interestingly
, the
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energy
sources provided by gas, oil
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and others
remained constant throughout the span of 4 years.

Regarding renewables, there was a drastic rise in the
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production
rates from 15% in 2014 to 26. 2% in 2018.
However
, the contribution by coal decreased
markedly
by approximately 10% with the final figures at 18. 1% in 2018.

In 2014, nuclear power
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production
accounted for 22. 5% of the total
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energy
. Later in 2018, this
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generation dropped
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by 1% whereas the
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production
of
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energy
by gas, oil
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and others
remained unchanged at 30. 1% and 4%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years.

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