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The pie chart and graph below gives information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.

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The information about the sale of Coca Cola in distinct Markets and its share prices from 1996 to 2000 one is depicted in pie chart and line graph overall it observed the North America Latin America and Europe were biggest markets of Coca Cola in 2000 and from 1996 to 2001 the fluctuations were noticed in a firm's share prices looking at the information in more detail the Latin Americans and North Americans were consumed Coca-Cola product a in highly amount as 25. 7 % and 30. 4% respectively in 2000 on the other hand your parents gave contribution to coca-colas profit by utilising 20. 5% a unit that Asia Africa and Middle East was counted lowest in the sales of Coca-Cola product as 16. 4 % and 7. 0 % orderly by region 2000 for the more in 1996 the share price of Coca Cola was dollar 38 after that the Rapid increase was observed in 1997 and 1998 as a proximately dollar 70 and dollar 80 of Coca Cola share prices and later than the significant change was occurred from 1998 to 1999 as price rate of Coca-Cola came lowest as the nearly dollar 56 more over last two years were also face the Rapid decline in Coca Cola price rate as it reached on dollar 50
The information about the sale of Coca
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Cola
in distinct Markets and its
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share
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prices
from 1996 to 2000 one
is depicted
in pie chart and line graph
overall
it observed the North America Latin America and Europe were
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biggest
markets of Coca
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Cola
in 2000 and from 1996 to 2001 the fluctuations
were noticed
in a firm's
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share
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prices
looking at the information in more detail the Latin Americans and North Americans
were consumed
Coca-Cola product
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a
in
highly
amount as 25. 7 % and 30. 4%
respectively
in 2000
on the other hand
your parents gave contribution to coca-colas profit by
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utilising
20. 5% a unit that Asia Africa and Middle East
was counted
lowest in the sales of Coca-Cola product as 16. 4 % and 7. 0 % orderly by region 2000 for the more in 1996 the
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share
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price
of Coca
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Cola
was
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dollar
38 after that the Rapid increase
was observed
in 1997 and 1998 as a
proximately
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dollar
70 and
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dollar
80 of Coca
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Cola
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share
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prices
and later than the significant
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change
was occurred
from 1998 to 1999 as
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price
rate of Coca-Cola came lowest as the
nearly
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dollar
56 more over last two years were
also
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face
the Rapid decline in Coca
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Cola
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price
rate as it reached on
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dollar
50
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IELTS academic The pie chart and graph below gives information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.

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