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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. pBPL

The given line graph represents the comparison of different energy consuming by fuel (Petrol and Oil; Coal; Natural Gas; Nuclear; Solar/Wind; Hydropower) in USA between 1980 and 2030. Units are measured in quadrillion. In general, Petrol and Oil category is dominating with largest amount of consumption between given period. As is presented in graph, Petrol and Oil used to have 35 quadrillion usage in 1980. However, it will dominate in 2030 and will have had almost 50 quadrillion consumption. The next 2 categories Coal and Natural Gas have been fluctuating between 1980 and 2030. The usage of Coal was nearly 15 quadrillion, while Natural Gas had 20 quadrillion in 1980. Even though the consuming of Coal dramatically increased by almost 30 quadrillion. The other 3 categories Nuclear, Solar/Wind, Hydropower will have remained steady by 2030, with indicator approximately 5 quadrillion. In 1980 this categories (Nuclear, Solar/Wind, Hydropower) used to have below 5 quadrillion.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line graph represents the comparison of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 energy consuming by fuel (Petrol and Oil; Coal; Natural Gas; Nuclear; Solar/Wind; Hydropower) A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".in the USA
in USA
 between 1980 and 2030. Units are measured
 in quadrillion.

In general
, Petrol and Oil You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
category
 is dominating with A determiner is probably missing here: "the largest".the largest
largest
 amount of consumption between This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period.

As is presented
 in graph, Petrol and Oil This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have 35 quadrillion usage in 1980. However
, it will dominate in 2030 and will have had almost 50 quadrillion consumption. The next
 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
categories
 Coal and Natural Gas have been fluctuating between 1980 and 2030. The usage of Coal was nearly
 15 quadrillion, while Natural Gas had 20 quadrillion in 1980. “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
 the consuming of Coal dramatically
 increased by almost 30 quadrillion. The other 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
categories
 Nuclear, Solar/Wind, Hydropower will have remained steady by 2030, with indicator approximately 5 quadrillion. In 1980 Did you mean "these"?these
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
categories
 (Nuclear, Solar/Wind, Hydropower) This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have below 5 quadrillion. 