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The pictures shows the Sunnyhills university campus changes from 1995 to today.

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The pictures below illustrate how the Sunnyhills university campus changes from 1995 to today. Overall, it is noticeable that there have been a massive number of changes in the position of facilities and structures parts. Analyzing the map before modernization, there were two car parks situated correspondingly in the top left and the middle right corner, in which the car park was next to the first one. On the left side of the middle part, the Main reception, Watson’s building and Halls of residence were located from the upper part to the lower one. Besides them, there were Students’ union, Founder’s building and Scott library, respectively. The middle part was surrounded by trees on the left and lower sides. On the east part, the Cafe was beyond the Football pitch and next to them were the Tennis court and Gym. According to the second map, the main reception is in the top left hand corner under two halls of residence and opposite the car park. Arts building and laboratory were built under the Watson and Founder’s building, respectively. The big area was removed by recreation area with a lot of trees and one pond. Scott library is relocated to between the founder’s building and a new table tennis. Above the Scott library is the student’s union which is between the squash, courts, gym and a bus stop.
The pictures below illustrate how the
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Sunnyhills
university campus
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changes
from 1995 to
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today
.

Overall
, it is noticeable that there have been a massive number of
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changes
in the position of facilities and structures parts.

Analyzing the map
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before
modernization, there were two car parks situated
correspondingly
in the top
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left
and the middle right corner, in which the car park was
next
to the
first
one. On the
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left
side of the middle
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part
, the Main reception, Watson’s
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building
and Halls of residence
were located
from the upper
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part
to the lower one.
Besides
them, there were Students’ union, Founder’s
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building
and Scott library,
respectively
. The middle
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part
was surrounded
by trees on the
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left
and lower sides. On the east
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part
, the
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Cafe
was beyond the Football pitch and
next
to them were the Tennis court and Gym.

According to the second map, the main reception is in the top
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left
hand corner under two halls of residence and opposite the car park. Arts
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building
and laboratory
were built
under the Watson and Founder’s
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building
,
respectively
. The
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big
area
was removed
by recreation area with
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a lot of
trees and one pond.
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Scott library
is relocated
to between the founder’s
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building
and a new table tennis. Above the Scott library is the student’s union which is between the squash, courts, gym and a bus
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stop
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