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The new city plan for future development

The new city plan for future development R07GQ

The design illustrates here showing the current map of a city called Islip and a new architectural design for it's future development. The new design is included bus station, shopping center, and more features that are missing to the present one. While entering the city, on the right side there is a school. There are many shops in both sides of the main road, and to find the countryside one must move to the North. The south side includes housing. The park is situated on the south east side of the city. As planned recently, the new city has more facilities. For pedestrians, a long walkway has been included in the middle of the city. The most amaizing thing about the new city plan is the dual carriageway. After entering to the city, people can move any sides through this. More housing areas has been allocated as more people will be staying to the city. But, the number of shops has been decreased as more things has been added to the city plan. In conclusion, the new city arrangement will be more enjoyable for the people. The recreational space is now smaller than before, but for the better accomodation, the authoriy took this major decision.

The design illustrates here showing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 map of a city called Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
 and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 architectural design for Did you mean "its future development"?its future development
it's future development
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 design is included
 bus station, shopping center, and more features that are missing to the present one.

While entering the city, on the right side there is a school. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 shops in both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
 of the main road, and to find the countryside one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to the North. The south side includes housing. The park is situated
 on the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
 side of the city.

As planned recently, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 city has more facilities. For pedestrians, a long walkway has been included
 in the middle of the city. The most Possible spelling mistake found.amazing
amaizing
 thing about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 city plan is the dual carriageway. After entering to the city, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
 through this. More housing areas has been allocated
 as more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will be staying to the city. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the number of shops has been decreased
 as more things has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the city plan.

In conclusion
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 city arrangement will be more enjoyable for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. The recreational space is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 smaller than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 for the better Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
, the Possible spelling mistake found.authority
authoriy
 took this major decision. 