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The pictures illustrate the steps and equipments of making cement, and how to produce concrete from cement for construction.

The pictures illustrate the steps and equipments of making cement, and how to produce concrete from cement for construction. mbPN8

The pictures illustrate the steps and equipments of making cement, and how to produce concrete from cement for construction. Overall, the process of producing cement is divided into five steps, meanwhile only two stages are required for making cement. In term of manufacturing cement, limestone and clay are poured into the crusher before being mixed up. Next step, the mixture experience a process of heating at a rotating heater, and then people put onto grinder. Finally, finished cement is packed into the bags. Regarding to the concrete-making, it has four materials, which are gravel maked up for half of it. Gravel and other materials include cement (15%), water (10%) and sand (25%) are blended together in a concrete mixer. Eventually, the product is concrete used for building purposes.

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