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Supply of renewable energy in four country

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The information reflects the percentage of renewable energy in the sum energy of three periods in four country is depicted by rendered bar chart. The data has been calculated in percentage Overall, the highest supply of renewable energy were conducted in norway since 2007 and lowest supply of energy were going in Australia in 2000 yearTo begain with, a drametic increase was evident in the supply of renewable energy in norway from three different given period. moreover, a slightly increase and decrease were seen in iceland it is accounted for 51%, 56, and 60% in three different years. Furthermore, in Australia the supply of renewable energy was stable in all of years and it is comprised to 10%. moving to next country Germany, their had been drastic increase seen between 2000 to 20007. Lastly all the country showing increasing flow year by year
The information reflects the percentage of
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of three periods in four country
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IELTS academic Supply of renewable energy in four country

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