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The charts show the revenue sources and expenditures for a year of children charity charity in USA

The charts show the revenue sources and expenditures for a year of children charity charity in USA 66M7x

Information relating to the revenue sources and for as well as the expenditures for a year of a children charity organization in USA is provided in the pie charts. A glance at the picture apparently delineates that donated food was the major source of income as compared to other sources and expenditures accounted for program services. According to the graph, donated food provided a large amount of money 86. 6%. The second, major source of income was community contributas at 0. 4% which was followed by program revenue at 2. 2 %. . The other income sources' contribution way much smaller. Investment income, Government grants and other income, they contributed 0. 8%. Turning towards expenditures, program services accounted for 95. 8% which was the highest. While money spent on fundraising and Management and General was 2. 6%and 1. 6% respectively. The total amount of money was $53, 561, 580 which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53, 224, 896.

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expenditures
 of $53, 224, 896. 