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The pictures illustrate information about the proportion used household in the US in 1970 and 2004.

The pictures illustrate information about the proportion used household in the US in 1970 and 2004. Kw023

The pictures illustrate information about the proportion used household in the US in 1970 and 2004. Overall, it can be seen that the largest used in 2004 was mortgage, while in 1970 mortgage had a small range with food. Firstly, we can see that in 1970 mortgage as popular household with 26% used and it is clear that in 2005 the highest expenditure used was mortgage also at 50%. It was different with average household in 1970 where there was a range 1 percent between first and food as second place, in 2004 there was a range 37% among entertainment in the second place and Mortgage. Finally, in the next stage there were food in 2004 and Clothing in 1970 where they witnessed 12% and 25%respectively. Secondly, it is clear that average household in 1970 between transport and entertainment had the same number at 13% and childcare in the last stage with 1%. Meanwhile, in 2004 clothing and childcare experienced 10 percent, while in the last level was transport at 5%.

The pictures illustrate information about the proportion This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 in the US in 1970 and 2004. Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the largest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in 2004 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtcontract
mortgage
, while in 1970 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtcontract
mortgage
 had a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 range with food.

Firstly
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that in 1970 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtcontract
mortgage
 as popular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 with 26% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 and it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that in 2005 the highest expenditure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtcontract
mortgage
also
 at 50%. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 with average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 in 1970 where there was a range 1 percent between first
 and food as second place, in 2004 there was a range 37% among entertainment in the second place and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtcontract
Mortgage
. Finally
, in the next
 stage there were food in 2004 and Clothing in 1970 where they witnessed 12% and 25%respectively
.

Secondly
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
household
 in 1970 between transport and entertainment had the same number at 13% and childcare in the last stage with 1%. Meanwhile, in 2004 clothing and childcare experienced 10 percent, while in the last level was transport at 5%. 